Tuesday Guest Feature – Sue Wickstead

My Tuesday guest featured today is not only a talented children’s author but also a fellow Chindi member and local friend. Sue has come along to share an article written especially for this blog, titled The Bewbush Playbus. Over to Sue.

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The Bewbush Playbus

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Sue Wickstead

Have you ever travelled on a bus? This was a question I’d ask the children when visiting their school. It was always a surprise to hear that many hadn’t. I’d then tell them how I’d once worked with a special bus, a Playbus, and how I was writing a book all about it.

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When the Bewbush Playbus book was first published I was able to show them photographs of the real bus. This would follow with lots of questions.

What’s a Playbus?

What does it do?

I was able to explain how the bus was a pioneering project with royal links, a Queen’s Silver Jubilee Community Project, and the first in the South-East. The bus was converted at Gatwick Airport and given the name ‘Supersonic Bus’. It initially provided a playscheme to the new developing estate of Bewbush.

How was it different?

The bus didn’t have any seats. Instead it was full of toys, games and activities and driven to children, wherever the need may be, and was often seen at events in and around Crawley.

The children’s games were always full of imagination. They loved the bus, including my own two children who attended the Playbus Playgroup.

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I became involved in the running of the Playbus charity, helping to raise its profile. With fund-raising and grant applications we were looking to upgrade our old bus with a newer model, which we eventually did.

The photographs in the Bewbush Playbus book were from exhibition displays and private collections and highlighted all that we did or could offer.

We also joined the National Playbus Association charity, through which we met many other Playbus projects, and learnt how much more a Playbus could do.

Unfortunately in 2003 the Playbus closed and I was asked to document its photographic history into a book. A copy of the Bewbush Playbus book, published in 2012, was donated to every school in Crawley as well as the local museum. It was an important part of the town’s social history.

Most importantly for me it led to answering the children’s questions with stories and this led me to writing and publishing picture books using a bus theme. Jay-Jay the Supersonic Bus was the first fictional tale and tells how the Playbus came about, his real number plate JJK 261 gave him his name.

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The Playbus really captured my heart and it has been lovely to hear from many children, now grown up, who have fond childhood memories of their time spent on it.

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Thank you, Sue, for such an informative article where the reader is able to see how the real playbus inspired you to write your children’s bus series.

Age range for Sue’s children’s books – 4 – 8 years

 

The above books may be purchased from Sue’s website.

Let’s find out a little more about Sue.

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About the Author 

Sue Wickstead is a teacher and author. She has currently written seven children’s picture books using a bus theme as well as a photographic history book about the real bus.

Sue once worked with a playbus charity based in Crawley. This led her to write the photographic history book about the project. Bewbush Playbus was published in 2012. She later wrote a fictional tale about the bus. Jay-Jay the Supersonic Bus, his number plate JJK261 gave him his name. This has been followed by six more picture books which all have a bus connection and link to her teaching journey.

You can find Sue on the following links

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Challenge – A story in less than 100 words

Today’s challenger is Eileen Phyall. Eileen’s reponse to the challenge comes in the form of Seeing through a glass darkly. Hope you enjoy it.

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I would not believe death was the end.

As instructed I’d collected the herbs and spell from the apothecary.

Standing by the mirror, after drinking the mixture I waited for the glass to darken.

Would I get a glimpse of you?

The moment came.

You smiled, then you were gone.

Now I’m alone again. Heart heavy, purse lighter, waiting for another sickle moon.

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Thank you, Eileen for your story. Funny how the dark side comes out a lot in these challenges. I know when I write them myself they tend to move that way too.

What does everyone else think?

Chindi Christmas Book

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A few months ago we had a Chindi meeting. Chindi are a network of independent authors that I’m proud to be part of. During this meeting it was announced that we were going to produce a Christmas anthology of stories with a Sussex theme and as Chindi members we were expected to submit a story for consideration.

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Submissions for the anthology weren’t just limited to Chindi members but opened up to writers all over.

At the time I hadn’t written a short story for a while as I was deep in novel writing and poetry, so this was quite a challenge. I also didn’t have any particular Christmas memories of Sussex of my own to use as a springboard. I therefore I stepped back to my youth when my sister and I used to hang around with greasers on motorbikes.

 

 

However, I didn’t want to be writing about the 70s, instead I wanted a contemporary story but deciding what young men in leather jackets with motorbikes are called today became quite a quandary. After consulting my Facebook Fans I came to the conclusion that they’re bikers. So I had bikers, a Christmas theme, and I quite fancied a wedding with a difference. I was now able to write my story titled ‘Winter Solstice’.

I was really pleased when I heard that my story was to be included in the anthology,  A Feast of Christmas Stories:  Unwrap a Sussex Tale.

You can read my story, and stories written by other authors, including the bestseller Beryl Kingston, when you purchase a copy of the anthology.

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More about the anthology 

‘A Feast of Christmas Stories’. Sixteen tales with a seasonal vibe from Chindi authors, including dragons and moonlight, ghosts and a heart-rending tale of childhood Christmas from best-selling author Beryl Kingston

It’s available to pre-order now as an e-book on all platforms for only £2.99 and paperback by clicking here

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It makes a great stocking filler!

I look forward to hearing what you think about our stories.

If you’d like to know more about the Chindi authors then do visit their website , Facebook  and Twitter pages.

 

 

 

Tuesday Guest Feature – Geoff Parkes

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Hi Geoff, thank you for agreeing to take part in my Tuesday Blog Feature. Anyone that knows Geoff will immediately think about ‘grammar’. However, today he’s come along  to chat about his ‘Five joys of the English Language’.

Without further ado let’s go over to Geoff. 

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Five Joys of the English Language

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Geoff Parkes

It was clear from an early age that my career would centre on English Language. In a school class of 28, I routinely came twenty-eighth in physics and first in English. Here are five aspects of English that have brought me particular joy.

  1. Reading

Though I have always loved reading, my reading habits have changed. I used to read novels and plays, but now I also read a lot of poetry and biographies of those I admire, like Laurie Lee, Mary Wesley, and Kenneth Tynan. I enjoy reading vastly different books on the same day: it’s like riding a toboggan in the morning, a camel in the afternoon, and a Ferris wheel in the evening.

  1. Writing

As with reading, this has changed. I was a journalist on the university newspaper. Next came years of writing English as Foreign Language (EFL) books. Recently I have switched mainly to novels, short stories, poems, and short plays, and I’ve dabbled with life writing. There’s huge cross-pollination: writing poetry makes prose more intense; writing plays sharpens up the dialogue in novels. I love the discipline of trying to create something that has form and meaning and is beautiful to listen to. For me, sound, rhythm and metre are important.

  1. Teaching

More than 80% of my working life has been spent teaching English. It’s a joy to deal every day with topics you love, and it’s especially pleasurable when motivated students ask intelligent questions. Never a week went by without me having to look things up which students had queried in class. I’m grateful to them for broadening my horizons.

  1. Publishing

Teaching is immensely rewarding, but there is one thing missing: an end product. After a course, you wave goodbye to students with a warm glow of satisfaction yet have nothing to show for it but memories. I will never forget the moment when I first held a book that I had produced. Yes! The fruits of three years’ labour nestled in my palm. It’s the same feeling you have if you’re a potter, an artist, or a cabinet maker. You treasure that object for years.

  1. Research

The three main prongs of English Language – grammar, vocabulary, and pronunciation – are equally fascinating, and I have done research into all three. As a student, I analysed the language of advertising. In the eighties, I became fascinated with the 300-odd words that have alternative pronunciations – scone, cervical, controversy, zebra, etc. – and set out to discover (by recording people) which were the number one variants. Nobody had ever done that. Later, I did a frequency count of English colloquial idioms.

Once you have been bitten by the research bug, it never leaves you. The more specialised the topic, the less likely it is that anyone has trodden that path before. You are a pioneer entering a vast rain forest, and you may well stumble across a purple-and-orange butterfly that no one else has seen.

Yes, these are my five main joys. All have enriched my life, but if you ask me to single one out, it is research that has given me the biggest buzz.

Many thanks, Trish, for inviting me on your blog.

My pleasure, Geoff. I’ve loved reading about your five joys and confident that my readers will do. I love your quote ‘You are a pioneer entering a vast rain forest…’ I hope you visit again in the future.

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More about Geoff.

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Geoff Parkes grew up in Hertfordshire and went to Newcastle University before completing an M.A. in English at Cardiff University. He has worked in a timber yard, a dustcart factory, and a ladies’ underwear firm. After TEFL training, he taught English in Norway, Germany, Spain and Denmark. He then founded Southampton English Language Centre and the publishing company, Englang Books.

Geoff has written numerous EFL books, two novels, Whale Soup and Nothing Ever Happens in Clacton, and several prize-winning short stories. His main interests are swimming, hiking, foreign languages, and travel, especially to New Zealand, The Canary Islands, and Cuba.

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If you’d like to know more about Geoff and his writing you can visit him on his website here. He is also available by email.

Details of all Geoff’s books may be found on his website but you may also purchase

Whale Soup and Nothing ever happens in Clacton are both available in kindle format via Amazon.

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Challenge – A story in less than 100 words

Today’s challenger is Jacqueline Taylor whose response comes in the form of Deadly Nightmare. Is it as deadly as it sounds? Read on to find out.

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Waking up with a jolt I glanced at the clock; it read three fifteen. I wondered why Pudsey hadn’t jumped up to lick my hand. Then realised with horror I couldn’t hear my wife’s gentle snores. In fact I couldn’t even hear her breathing.

I tried to put my hand out to shake her but I couldn’t move. I must be having a nightmare. I’d wake up in a minute. I glanced at the clock again. Time had stood still.

Suddenly it came to me. Was it a nightmare or was I actually dead?

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OOh, I think perhaps it is as deadly as it sounded. What do you think?

 

 

 

 

 

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Tuesday Guest Feature – Michelle Dunbar

Today’s special guest is, Michelle Dunbar, a talented writer and editor that I came across while studying creative writing with the Open University.

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Michelle has come along to tell you how she got into editing and a little about the process she goes through in her daily duties as a developmental editor, but first let’s find out a little more about our guest.

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Michelle Dunbar lives on the outskirts of Glasgow with her husband, two sons, and two dogs. She is an avid reader, writer, and editor of science fiction and fantasy and is currently working on her first novel. She enjoys films and Netflix dramas in her favourite genres, and if she has the time, some gardening and baking.

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And now over to Michelle with her article ‘Life as a Developmental Editor’.

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Life as a Developmental Editor

Michelle Dunbar

I am a developmental editor of science fiction and fantasy. I read early drafts of books and provide authors with feedback regarding the ‘bigger’ picture: Plot, story, tone, characterisation, and settings are just a few of the things I look for and give advice on.

I fell into editing through a chance tweet by an independent publisher. I had just finished studying the Advanced Creative Writing module with the Open University when the publisher, who is, sadly, no longer trading, invited me to apply to their internship as an acquisition editor. Over the course of a year, I read submissions and selected which books I felt had merit. I also had the opportunity to do some substantive and copy editing on a couple of books scheduled for publication.

I was no stranger to providing fellow authors with feedback and advice as I used to read books authors intended to send off to agents and publishers (beta reading) in the days before self-publishing became accessible to independent authors. So, after completing my English Literature degree in 2016, I started my own business.  I chose to specialize in developmental editing because structure and the different elements that go into creating a story is what interests me, and the reason I chose to specialise in science fiction and fantasy is because I wanted to increase my knowledge of common tropes and trends, with a view to helping the authors writing in these genres as much as possible.

It is important to enjoy the genres I edit in because I read each book a minimum of two, but usually three times. My first read is as a reader to gauge my initial thoughts on the story and characters. The second time I read it, I don my editor ‘hat’ and critique areas of weakness and offer praise where a scene or character works particularly well. Once this part of the process is complete, the author receives their manuscript back and makes any changes in relation to the feedback received before sending it back for a final ‘read through’, along with any questions or concerns they might have.

One of the most enjoyable parts of my job is watching a story develop from an early draft to a polished manuscript. Over the past four years, I have edited over one hundred and forty books, most of which are self-published, and now work alongside two copy editors, an additional developmental editor, and a cover designer. Just recently, I created a writing group on Facebook, with the intention of helping new writers to improve their craft. Despite my experience and current knowledge of writing techniques, I am a strong believer in professional development. I take courses on editing and devour books on the craft of writing, and I am about to commence my first year studying an MA in Creative Writing.

As for the future, I shall continue to assist authors where I can, and hope to publish my first novel in the not-too-distant future.

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Thank you, Michelle. A very informative article. Good luck with the MA, if you enjoy it even half as much as I enjoyed mine, then you’re going to love it. Where can my readers find you?

Website 

Company Website

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Twitter

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Examples of books that Michelle has edited.

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Challenge – Write a story in less than 100 words

Today’s challenger to write a story in less than 100 words is writer Marian Shalloe. Marian’s response comes in the form of Rainbow’s End which may be read below.

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As a child I read fairy stories to escape the harsh reality of my existence, I believed in leprechauns who kept a pot of gold at the end of every rainbow in Ireland.

One summer on my uncle’s farm, I saw a beautiful rainbow stretch across the land and set off on an adventure alone over the lush green fields to follow it. Then the Irish rain came down hard, the rainbow disappeared and I became lost.

Eventually, when found, I was punished for running off and so at such a tender age any spontaneity was curtailed.

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What a sad little story, Marian.

If you’d like to know more about Marian and her writing you can find her here on Facebook

 

 

 

 

What inspired me to write House of Grace?

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Today, I thought I’d share how House of Grace was born.  In 2013 I was finishing my BA degree with the Open University with the hopes of becoming a primary school teacher but there was one particular obstacle. I didn’t have any GCSE’s as I went straight to work at fifteen to help support the family due to my father’s disability and inability to work.

So off I went to the local college and signed up for GCSE Maths and English. It was rather strange working on the GCSE English assignments while working on the advanced creative writing course with The Open University. For instance, through the degree I learnt that you avoid using anything other than ‘said’ for the characters as ‘said’ becomes invisible on the page and anything more is the author interfering with the story. However, the GCSE remit encouraged words like ‘exclaimed’ etc.

Anyway, I’m digressing. While studying for the GCSE English, I read George Orwell’s Road to Wigan Pier and one of the assignments was to write a piece of writing about ‘A Day as a Miner’ or ‘A Day as a Miner’s Wife.’ I chose the latter and once the assignment was marked I never gave it another thought. That is until…

I was writing the dissertation for my BA assignment. The life story I was working on became  too painful and I realised it wasn’t ready to be written. I panicked. What was I going to do now? I was going to fail my degree. I turned to Google searching inspiration for a story when I suddenly remembered my character, the miner’s wife. So I had a miner’s wife but needed more. I’d enjoyed watching ‘Mr Selfridge’ and in my younger days loved ‘House of Elliott’ so I allowed them to influence me. I decided Grace, my miner’s wife, wanted to become a fashion designer and own lots of big stores. However, as a daughter of titled parents, her father, Lord Granville, had other ideas. Despite being 1950, he wanted her to have an arranged marriage. As for where the miner’s wife comes into the story, well I can’t go into any more without offering spoilers.

House of Grace was therefore inspired not only by George Orwell’s Road to Wigan Pier, but television dramas Mr Selfridge and House of Elliott. It’s a riches to rags story and if you enjoy family sagas like Downton Abbey and Mr Selfridge then it’s likely you’ll enjoy House of Grace too.

House of Grace is the first part of a trilogy but all the books may also be read as standalones. ‘The Coal Miner’s Son’, Book 2 in the series is coming soon.

By the way, I never did make becoming a teacher as I discovered I needed GCSE Science too and I couldn’t face that as well as the PGCE so I opted to become a Master of Creative Writing instead.

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For a limited period I am offering signed copies of House of Grace for a silly price of £5 plus postage and packaging via bank transfer or £5:50 plus postage and packaging via PayPal.

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This is the perfect time to pick up a copy as The Coal Miner’s Son is coming very soon. A signed paperback makes a perfect gift. Contact me for details.

Rather read on Kindle – you can do that too. By clicking on this link.  It is £1:99 on Kindle and FREE to read if you have Kindle Unlimited.