Challenge: ‘Write a story in 100 words’

Thank you Daniel Crowley for taking part in the challenge to write a story in less than one hundred words. Daniel’s response comes in the form of The Doctor which you can read below.

The Doctor (3)

The door closed with a soft click and Dr Anderson smiled to himself.

This was Rachel’s first visit back after chemo. He had noticed the signs of remission in her X-rays and was now able to shed the first rays of light into her cold fragmented world.

Peter Anderson felt particularly pleased to be the bearer of good news because Rachel Hudson was his niece.

There were times when he had worried whether the blood tie would prevent him being dispassionate in dealing with her case. Obviously, this was not true.

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