B – Broken Bone in Bucuresti
This is another poem of mine and tells the tale of when I broke my hip back in 2014 on the stairs of a Romanian underground while on a course with Brighton University as part of my MA in Creative Writing. Broken Bone in Bucaresti was written about eighteen months later when I tried to make light of my accident. It was first published in Writing Magazine and later on OAPSchat website.
Enjoy.
Broken Bone in Bucuresti
Racing to catch
a Nicolae Grigorescu,
Metro train, I stumble
down a stair:
I hear the snap—
throbs screech in my groin,
my voice is alien.
Heads fold around me,
I turn
away
to avoid their stare,
my eyes clench. I throw up.
Someone presses my wrist,
someone else holds my hand.
Jabbering in code,
little green men
ease me onto a stretcher,
elevate me, feet first,
towards cold blue sky—
fists scrunch,
heart skips double-unders—
The bone cutter
roars,
splinters
scatter,
rivets
groan,
screws
tighten.
Six days lost in a strange land:
frail attempts at iPad translation
cue howls of laughter.
I hobble flamingo style,
sticks at my side, into a mad-driver’s bubble
on an endless terror ride.
On board the plane at last,
I reclaim my breath—
Feast on a cheese roll and white wine—
Let the healing begin.
First off, ouch! That is really graphic but good. Love how you have turned it around at the end to a more light hearted style. Beautiful poem Patricia.
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Thank you, Anita. Later in the challenge you will see the poem that I started in my head while having my operation. They are quite different.
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The bone cutter is very real. Ouch! Simple fare gives relief at the end. A poem that offers hope.
Thank youxx
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Thank you, Maureen.
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